hi~ joy. i am lucy who want to speak Enlish very well. ->
Correction: Hi Joy! I am Lucy who wants to speak English very well.
Correction : want -> wants
Nice to meet you!
i cant sleep tonight. because i am ready teaching my children yet. so i am preparing it.
-> Correction : I can't sleep early tonight, because I need to teach my children. I am preparing for it now.
i am headack now, and i am sleeping.....
-> Correction : I have a headache now, and feel sleepy. But, I am excited to meet you. See you soon!
Correction : Anyway, I am excited to meet you. |